Love and Anger,
George Walker
Reviewed
by Patrick McEvoy-Halston
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The
Good Fight
July
2006
George
Walker’s Love and Anger celebrates
the virtues of a good fight, of a good war, and the rewards it offers its
participants. Though wars are a
kind of an embrace, they cannot be engaged in by lovers—they require good guys
and bad guys, who hate one another.
Walker implicitly understands how the desire for war mostly
moves all wars, and communicates it
primarily by cuing us to appreciate that all the good characters involved in
the play’s battle between good and evil have similar-seeming evil
counterparts. That is, he guides
us to see everyone involved in the fray as potentially interchangeable, as truly of the same kind. So if war is being praised, is there
anything or anyone in the play subjected to unmitigated critique? Yes, someone is. Though it well might be missed, Eleanor is set up for brutal criticism;
for she is an agent of the cruel suppression peacemaking affords, and the play is strongly aligned against
goodly doers of this worst sort.
I
understand that many will read/see the play and judge it a satiric attack on
power, lust, and greed—the usual triumvirate of the awful—embodied in its
characters Sean Harris and John Connor.
Yet much would have to be ignored in order to interpret the play this
way. One would have to ignore much
of how the play begins, for instance, for the play begins with the play’s
ostensible foremost good and enlightened character, Peter Maxwell, indulging in
just these same vices. Though he
was once as vice-prone as any other, though he agrees with Harris when he
argues that “for twenty years [he was] [. . .] one of the greediest and one of
the biggest” “greedy prick[s]” (70), Maxwell believes himself now reborn, newly
pure. Ostensible evidence of his
goodly transformation comes from the fact that he gave up a very lucrative
position as head of a prominent Toronto law firm to deal with society’s
downtown’ downtrodden. It also
comes from his giving-away of all his possessions. Connor is willing to believe Sarah when she suggests, as
part of an effort to manipulate him, that Maxwell might be “env[ious]” (50) of
him; but though vice-prone, he has no real cause to be envious, for the play
begins by showing just how much he actually acquired through descent.
He gets, for instance, new clientele—of, in truth, an especially
appealing kind. Though Maxwell
wants us to imagine them as consisting not just of the disadvantaged but of the
“quasi-exotic,” the “pathetic,” the “dregs” (30-31), and though Harris deems
Maxwell’s new clientele more reason to pity him, to not draw the law down upon
him, the only client of his we actually encounter provides him something he
likely did not possess with any surety with his previous clientele: namely, clear evidence of his power over them. That is, though Maxwell says that with his previous
clientele he used to “piss on their ingrained intelligence” (19), simply in
order to afford his services his previous clientele would have had to have
counted amongst the very rich and entitled; they would have been the sort to
know that Maxwell was their lawyer,
ultimately their servant, that they were the ones paying him. And though they would have respected Maxwell’s reputation
and genius, this would have made him but appropriate to properly attend to their business. Indeed, though the play concerns Maxwell’s life after having
left his old law firm, it still reminds us of what previous clientele contact
could have been like by showing us how Harris’s new client, Connor, reacts when
he believes he’s being poorly served.
When confused and confounded by Sarah’s behavior towards him, Connor
turns to Harris and exclaims: “Look,
you’re my lawyer and I want some answers from you right now!” (51). With Gail, Maxwell’s new client,
however, though she shows some dismay with her lawyer—i.e., Maxwell—too, she is
readily made quiescent, for she is vastly more dependent on hers than Connor is
on his own. Connor, being rich,
can always hire a different lawyer, an option not available to her. Nor is there any chance that even if
she could find other help s/he’d count amongst the country’s best lawyerly
minds, something we are told Maxwell once was, and may still be. Her dependency upon Maxwell, we note,
is made clear both to her and to us at the beginning of the first scene. Maxwell seems to have taken advantage
of the fact that he knows Gail really has no one else to turn to by speaking to
her in ways he wouldn’t dare with a less dependent client, with someone who
really could afford to turn down his services. Maxwell has talked to her—or, more accurately, at her—for
a half an hour, concerning things which clearly interest him but are of little
interest to her. When Gail
complains about his apparent lack of interest in her own concerns, Maxwell
responds by first reminding her that she is marginal (Maxwell tells her, “You’re
marginal. Your cause is
marginal. Outside the corridor, so
to speak” [13]), then of how lucky she is to have found him (Maxwell tells her,
“I believe you when obviously no one else does” [14]), and moves her to
appreciate that “a shiny new future” (15) depends entirely on her “letting” him
behave just as he wishes (Maxwell tells her, “you’ll have to allow me to
proceed in my own way” [14]). That
is, in response to her agitation and assertiveness, Maxwell manages her into—for him—comfortable pliancy.
Gail will not be paying Maxwell in cash; there is something else he
desires from her. This something
isn’t sex, but the play guides us to appreciate that if he had been a slightly
different man … for with Gail, the play presents us with a childish—with her
ball cap and jeans—young woman whose readiness to be servile is suggested in
her being in his office in response to Maxwell’s beckoning (i.e., his “call”
[14]). She has a husband; but his
return to her rests entirely with her getting this middle-aged man to agree to
take on her cause. This he agrees
to, but only if she agrees to “trust” (15) him, to accept his unusual behavior
and submit to his odd requests.
He hints that the thing she most has to offer is love, a willingness and
an ability to service the needs of all those in “need [of] love” (15). She shows this, but also fear: she fears he might be “crooked.” In sum, though I think—especially with
his easing her fears, his effort to get her to trust him, and his assurance
that if she does so her reward will be a shiny new future—there is something in
their relationship that smacks of the pedophilic “relationship” between the
candy-laden pedophile and the guileless child, we more strongly sense the
middle-aged man seeking not quite so puerile revitalization through
associations with the young, someone, that is, who is undergoing your typical
midlife crisis.
It should be difficult to understand Maxwell any different. He is in his early fifties and has been
further reminded of his mortality by just having suffered a stroke. His mind is clearly on death: when he surveys his life, he imagines
it one where “Death was surrounding [him] [. . .] like a demon inevitability”
(17). He suddenly understands his
life as unfulfilling, the definitive midlife crisis complaint. Harris, we note, makes the same
complaint. And when Harris visits
them we are made to appreciate how these ostensibly now completely different
men still share the exact same life goals.
With Harris and Maxwell, we have two men of about the same age
(specifically, Maxwell is “50,” Harris, in his “early 50s” [12]), who pursued
the same career path—law—and seek rejuvenation: Maxwell seeks “rebirth” (31); Harris, “new challenges”
(27). Maxwell believes himself on
a very different track than the one Harris still resides on, and there is cause
to mistake them as vastly dissimilar from one-another. Maxwell has stripped himself of his
earthly goods; Harris’ new pursuit is built on all he had accumulated: he will use the friends and reputation
he has acquired from being an established lawyer to launch a career as a
politician. Maxwell locates
himself in the “gutters” and associates with the destitute; Harris seeks “new
mountain”-tops and takes on increasingly affluent and powerful clients (i.e.,
Connor). But the differences,
though they appear significant, remain superficial: both paths attend to the very same needs, to assuaging the
exact same fear. The
(stereo)typical midlife fear is of death, and both paths tend to this
fear. Maxwell believes that with
his new life he has regained his childhood. He prefers to be called “Petie” because it better suits who
he has become—“[y]ounger,” “more unfinished” (30). He believes he has become the person he once was before law
school corrupted him, the young Maxwell who once had principles, who followed
his parents’ code of honor. Rather
than someone who will soon face death, he believes his miraculous re-invention
of himself amounts to a re-birth.
He will help create a “new era”:
Phase two is “[t]he amazing rebirth of Petie Maxwell and the new era to
which he is dedicated” (31). But
though Maxwell will be reborn, Harris’s new path means his maybe never
perishing: For no matter how
successful a lawyer becomes, it is only the lawyer who moves on to become a
politician that has any chance of being immortalized.
In
short, the play provides very good reason for understanding these two men as
not so different from one another as they prefer to believe the case. Maxwell believes Harris used him. He wants Harris to believe his theft of
his wife and kids made him feel like one of “God’s lowest creatures” (32). But we should not believe him in this,
for Harris’ theft is advantageous for Maxwell. In pursuit of a new life path, Maxwell seeks to shorn
himself of all that ties him to a previous one he associates with death. He gleefully gives away all he had
acquired during his twenty years as a lawyer, but had he also had to distance
himself from his wife and kids, he would not have been able to do so so
readily. Middle-aged men who in
their mid-life crisis act childishly and hang out with young women often
experience a crippling hangover:
they must deal with the anger and disappointment they receive from wives
and children they’ve neglected and humiliated. Thanks to Harris’ “theft” (for though Maxwell chides Harris
for thinking of his wife as a possession, it seems clear that Maxwell thinks of
her as much the same: He exclaims,
“You’d been screwing my wife” [32;
emphasis added]), Maxwell can more readily understand his rebirth as something
earned.
If
Harris’ own path wasn’t predicated on accumulation, Maxwell might actually “owe
him one” for taking his wife (a wife, we note, he thought a “jerk” [31]) and
kids off his hands. By having
Maxwell argue that his humiliation could be completed either by his bending down and kissing Harris’ ass or by Harris bending down and kissing
Maxwell’s, the play suggests that who exactly is using whom here may not be so
clear. More than this, with it
accomplishable regardless of who does the bending down and who the remaining
upright, the play encourages us to assess Maxwell’s descent and Harris’ ascent
as interchangeable, means to the very same end.
Since
Harris is Maxwell’s old partner, and since Connor is made to seem as much
Harris’ new partner as he is his new client (they are likened to a team
throughout), we are guided to compare Maxwell and Connor as if they were former
and current partners of Harris.’
And, indeed, in how they both differ from Harris—and despite Maxwell’s
attempt to establish Connor as nothing more than a Nazi—they can seem similar. Maxwell acknowledges that Harris is
charming. His charm and ease are
the products of his privileged family background. He is polished, good-looking, superior, the sort of person
people can feel almost obligated to promote to societies’ highest
positions. Both Maxwell and Connor
have made good, but despite the odds, through their ingenuity and
boldness. Connor makes clear that
he more or less emerged from nothing, that he came from a working-class
background. The same seems true of
Maxwell as well, for he characterizes his background as one where humility and honor
were the highest virtues—virtues, that is, held in highest-esteem typically by
the financially poor and martial (as opposed to commercial)-minded working
class. Both, too, are
hotheads. Connor is explosive and
quick to anger; and even though Maxwell can be tender, he certainly rages as
well. (Harris accuses him of
having spread “outrageous, bullheaded, unsupportable, inflaming crap” about
Connor, and given what we see of Maxwell, we do not doubt the accuracy of these
characterizations.)
Both
claim the same turf: they’re
ostensibly all about serving the needs of the lower classes. Maxwell would be their legal and moral
crusader, Connor their guide to all they need know of the world. In fact, given all we had by then heard
of Connor and Maxwell, at the beginning of scene three, when Sarah is telling
Eleanor and Gail her story of an invasion, as we hear her story and think of
its protagonists we might be thinking as much of Maxwell as we are of
Connor. Her story is about
invasive men “looking for a place to take over,” that are “[l]ooking for
adventure” (33). These men have “sold”
(33) all their goods, have “prostitute[d]” “their wives,” and set up a “headquarters”
in this alien territory (33-4).
They believe themselves “indestructible,” are intent on being “free to
be themselves,” have voices inside them “talking to them,” and have a
proprietary, expansive desire to get their “word [. . .] out” (34). Maxwell is looking for adventure (he
will identify his activities as an “adventure” [42]), has given away all his
goods, has a wife now sleeping with another man, believes he is “immune” (32)
to persecution, has entered an unfamiliar part of town and set up headquarters
there, has argued that his turn to the “dark side” in law school resulted from
a force having taking him over, believes himself finally “back” (26) to being
the man he once was, has made the whole city aware of his opinion of Connor,
and has his mind on the “reorganization of an entire culture” (29). So even though Sarah’s story is about
crusaders who hate those not-white-in-color, and even though Maxwell and others
repeatedly call Connor a Nazi, it is a story that actually lends to
understanding its main protagonists as being more similar to Maxwell than to Connor.
So
given that the play encourages us to consider just how different villains really
are from heroes, the play could be assessed as a satire on the efforts of
societal do-gooders, with all their ostensibly selfless, noble intentions. Though I have focused on the play’s
first act, its ending even better supports this thesis. The trial evidences an outrageously
greedy and unfair Maxwell. Though
he acknowledges that you can repent just by “say[ing] to yourself, ‘I repent’”
(70), Maxwell won’t allow that Harris might do the same to exonerate
himself. That is, “The demigod [,]
[. . .] [t]he former greedy prick[,] [. . .] [t]he man with a hole in his
brain[,] [. . .] [t]he angry man[,] [. . .] t]he reborn man[,] [. . .] [t]he avenger!” (71)—Maxwell—is the only one who gets to
repent. One cannot but sense here
that to Maxwell, Harris is simply means to satisfy his own need to feel
grandiose. The trial also
evidences a greedy and unfair Sarah as the presiding judge. Sarah believes she is fair, not
prejudicial (79), but she too is shown using the trial to humiliate Connor and
Harris—the same need she attended to earlier by fooling them into thinking she
was a lawyer (“Well that just shows how stupid you are. I’m a mental patient. You’ve been tricked by a person with a
shattered mind” [51]). Her verdict
of brutal humiliation and execution (they are to be drowned in toilets) for the
guilty, is moved by whim, not evidence.
And since this verdict follows a long series of humiliations (which
include brutal physical assault, and exhaustive name-calling) inflicted upon
the two (on Connor, especially), it is no surprise that a number of critics
find the court scene indulgent and counter-productive.
Mel
Gussow, for one, in a review for the New
York Times, argues that the play is “self-defeating[,]” for “[a]s the
lawyer [Maxwell] [. . .] sinks deeper into misanthropy and into sermonizing, he
becomes increasingly tiresome” (New York
Times, 9 December 1990). Of
course, if the play is judged a satiric attack on progressive reformers rather
than on the rich and powerful, Gussow’s reaction would argue for its effectiveness,
not its failure. Indeed, those who
react to the play as Gussow does and are familiar with the history of satire,
could see the play as akin to Apuleius’ Metamorphoses,
for, just as Love and Anger makes the
rich and poor seem similar to one another, just as it repeatedly emphasizes
their intrinsic similarity and mutual culpability by having them frequently
fuse into “a mass of punching, kicking, groaning bodies” (52):
The Metamorphoses shows that
in a narrative satire fictions operate through the interrelatedness of
characters: not only the
relationship between two people, a fool and a knave, but between rich and poor
fools, [. . .] and so on. They are
held close to a theme or a vice, but they also project a visualizable world of
total interrelatedness, like a cheese completely infiltrated by maggots [. . .]
[.] As it is unrolled, this world
is monotonously similar in all its details, and finally static; but a world
nevertheless in which Lucius [principle character of the Metamorphoses] is himself deeply implicated. (Ronald Paulson 57)
Or
perhaps they would find the play akin to picaresque satires, to those satires
that feature Quixote (heroic)-figures who aim to be honorable but “easily
become [. . .] selfish egoist[s] who tr[y] to make over the world in [their] [.
. .] own image” (Paulson 101). But
though in so many ways Love and Anger
seems intent on critiquing would-be heroes and leaving it at that, its over-all
intention is not really to show them
up. Instead, the play argues for
the real wisdom, rather than the folly, to be found—by one and all—through war.
The
play makes this argument primarily through what it shows happening to Sarah
when she engages with those she believes clearly evil and beyond
redemption. Just as it worked to make
Maxwell comparable to those he feuds with, the play encourages us to understand
Sarah as much the same as all the others constituting the massings that develop
out of each of the melees. She
believes Connor to be similarly possessed by mean-spirited voices, which talk
to/through and control them. She
serves as Maxwell’s new partner, and thereby is primed for ready comparison
with his previous one—Harris. She
too is in search of revitalization and freedom. And though while pretending to be his new law partner, she
is the one who voices a loud critique of simplistic, brutal solutions (i.e.,
she gets Connor to admit the absurdity of killing the poor as a solution to
downtown problems), she actually demonstrates why brutality can be an effective
means towards solving longstanding concerns. After Sarah does the admirable and the amazing in persuading
a veteran lawyer and a canny businessman she is a competent lawyer who can
handle and manipulate Maxwell, she, Gail, Harris, and Connor participate in a
wild melee. The fight is followed
by a blackout and an intermission:
the audience is made to wonder just what might have happened?, to
speculate as to what good could possibly have followed from two women taking on
at least one highly enraged male opponent who “wanted to kill” (53) them. When the play resumes, the audience is
provided good reason to decide things turned out badly, for “[t]he office is a
mess,” “Gail is sitting on the floor against the desk [,] [. . .] and Sarah is
lying face down near the door” (53).
But though Sarah says she likely has a broken bone, both she and Gail
are in fact actually doing very well.
Sarah found delivering blows very “satisfying”; she thoroughly enjoyed
getting “in a few really good whacks” (53). She in fact guesses that she’d have been better off if she’d
“started hitting earlier in [. . .] life” (53), and seems right in this, for
fighting lead not just to a momentary high but to be able “to make sense” (54),
to sanity, to a willingness to admit she does not in fact believe herself
black: a substantial step toward
using something superior to avoidance to deal with her troubles.
The
battle proved therapeutic, and in the loving and supportive sisterhood it
helped beget between Gail and Sarah, it looks to have engendered even
more. And we note that after the
fight, neither of them hate their opponents. Instead, Gail reflects on how her preferred way of seeing
the rich cloaked her own need to hate them, and admits that the rich might not
even actually be the villains she had admittedly willfully taken them for. Sarah admits she imagines herself black
because it helps her “feel brave” (54), and she’s surely onto something
here: for previously she admitted
that though she “doesn’t take messages” from ordinary people, she would rise to
action if such calls came from “[p]eople threatening Petie” (35).
Though they seem to do little more than drug her up, her doctors might
still appreciate that what Sarah really needed
was to be around those who could draw her out. For we are told they believe Sarah “has to have a way, even
in her state, to manifest her courage [. . .] [—] [t]hat her courage is still
the most important thing to her” (35).
It is Eleanor who relates this information, and it is Eleanor who
clearly does not believe it: for
she responds to Sarah’s participation in the fray simply by berating her for
it. She sees the results of the
melee, judges it foul—and as surely
resulting from Sarah’s impulsive decision to attack Gail. She is irate, and tells her sister to
stop “scaring [her] [. . .] to death” (56). Eleanor would have Sarah remain pacified, sedated through
drugs, because an active and alert Sarah is a source of considerable distress
for her. We note that Eleanor
wishes Maxwell had failed in his efforts to shift his work to the slums for the
same selfish reason. For even
while he’s suffering from another stroke, she can’t help but berate him for
making a move that has her feeling “very uneasy” and unable to “function”
(56). Maxwell, however, wants Eleanor
to join in with his group, to join in with his movement. It is a request he makes several times,
and we note her typical response: “Don’t
involve me in whatever it is you’re up to these days. I have problems of my own” (16). Near the play’s close, however, she says she would be “grateful”
(61) to be included—but in truth this would be cause not for celebration but
for regret, for nowhere in the text is there even a hint that she would prove
anything but a very sour addition to Maxwell’s gang.
Eleanor is a bummer, a spoiler of everyone else’s fun. Even after she says she would “honestly”
be very grateful to be included in Maxwell’s plans, just her presence causes
Sarah to lose confidence in her performance as the trial’s judge (we noticed
her ascent from cowering patient to competent lawyer to compelling judge) and
begin to cry. She is most active
in the trial when she slaps Connor on the face for his blasphemous prayer, an
act consistent with her response to Maxwell’s lambasting of religion at the beginning
of the play. (A battle follows her
slapping of Connor, but we note that since somehow everyone but Eleanor ends up “form[ing] [the] [.
. .] mass of [tangled] bodies” that end up on the couch, her exclusion is made
to seem as if it is one of the whole points behind the melee.) She is the one who would call the
police or the hospital in response to any dangerous development—and we note
that if she had called an ambulance after Maxwell suffered his stroke, he would
have been denied the opportunity to die honorably, redemptively, in
battle. (Harris and other
characters also at times threaten to call the police, but they always pull back
from doing so; indeed, their threats to call the police make them seem akin to
kids who threaten the same but are actually determined not to let things
transcend into adult control.)
We also note that in scene one Maxwell’s sudden need to berate people
on the street, to insist that they “[h]ave a little self-respect” (19), follows
his being schooled by Eleanor on the proper way to treat people. That is, Eleanor, who was introduced as
“[c]arrying a bag of cleaning supplies” (16), who is identified by her sister
as being “brilliant” at “tidy[ing] up” (61), makes Maxwell, the would-be
crusader of the downtrodden, sound, in his demand that the street people “[g]et
out of the garbage” (19), just like she does. The real threat to Maxwell and Sarah’s rejuvenation clearly
is not Harris and Connor, who, though they begin by mocking the trial, not only
actively participate in it but end up crediting its legitimacy—they dance and
cheer when they believe the apparently-not-so-show trial has established their
innocence and clarified their virtue—but rather, Eleanor. And after she unsettles Maxwell and
Sarah, she herself finds herself violated.
Connor
unsettles Eleanor when he handles her and moves her out of his way (20), and in
this particular instance, violence is set up as praiseworthy, not because it
can make people feel good but because it can make them feel really, really
lousy. Maxwell judges Connor’s
behavior to be truly odious. He
calls Connor a “bully” (20), and suggests his behavior toward Eleanor proves he
must have beaten his secretary so badly she required hospitalization (21). But the play guides us to question just
how offended Maxwell really is by Connor’s violence towards her, to wonder if
at some level if Connor, in attacking her, is serving as Maxwell’s agent for
pursuance of his own-suffered, Oedipal-related crimes. Connor’s assault on Eleanor follows a
contest between Maxwell and her that seems as if between mother and child. While interacting with Gail, he takes
out and plays with a string of colored paper clips. Eleanor, wishing him to behave less childishly, takes them
from him, an act he follows rebelliously by taking another clip from out of his
pocket. But since this contest
ends with her successfully chiding Maxwell away from childish behavior toward
advocacy of orthodox adult virtues (i.e., cleanliness, self-respect), it is one
she wins decisively. And then, we
note, Connor bullies her. Maxwell
actually construes the attack as a child’s upon his mother. He asks Connor, “What’s wrong. Some trouble with mummy?” (20). But the play makes clear that it is
Maxwell, not Connor, who is prone to think of Eleanor as his mother: for his near last words are, “Eleanor,
you look like my mother” (83).
Eleanor is not gravely hurt by play’s end, and if we assess the play
as holding the same conception of mothers many of those living in the
twentieth-century’s other extended period of Darwinian capitalism—the 1920s—did,
this would have been too much to ask.
At one point in the play Maxwell calls God a “she” (42), suggesting that
rather than a man and a father the almighty is instead a woman and a
mother. Ann Douglas writes that ’20’s
New Yorkers believed the same thing, that is, that the greatest obstacle to
growth was a (historical) woman (in their case, their predecessor, the
Victorian Titaness)—and held destroying her the first of priorities. Specifically, she argues in Terrible Honesty that for its cultural
emergence modern New York depended upon a collective, ruthless effort to
distinguish itself from a Victorian, matriarchal past. New Yorkers, she argues, believed their
predecessors to be puppets of clan matriarchs, and in order to avoid their
fate, made their city firmly opposed and offensive to matriarchal control.
Douglas spends a great deal of her book delineating how writers,
especially, played a big part in helping New Yorkers understand their city as
matricidal, in showing how they not only helped create but helped keep going
the manic but highly creative ’20s energy. And it may be that works such as Love and Anger played a part in helping sustain the manic period of
indulgent capitalism Torontonians experienced at the end of the
twentieth-century. For just like
how writers in the ’20s helped entrench the presence of the brutal, empowered
father-figure, Love and Anger leaves
us with the sense that the text’s featured bully(er) of mothers—Connor—will
continue to rule in Toronto. It
ends with him feeling rejuvenated,
dead set on “keep[ing] the momentum going” (81). And though it is easy to imagine playgoers being
disappointed in this, it is just as easy to imagine the affluent amongst them,
those enjoying all the spoils Darwinian capitalism afforded them, feeling
reassured that this satire was not one which foretold the end to “bad boy”
economics. Since satires are
normally understood not just as critiques but as agents of reform, the
Toronto-advantaged were likely well allayed in it actually playing out as
something of an anti-satire.
Works
Cited
Douglas, Ann. Terrible
Honesty: Mongrel Manhattan in the 1920s. New York: Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 1995. Print.
Gussow,
Mel. “Behind the Scenes Villainy at Court.” The
New York Times. 9 December
1990. Web.
Paulson, Ronald. The Fictions of Satire. Baltimore: John Hopkins Press, 1967.
Print.
Walker, George. Love
and Anger. Toronto: Coach House, 1990. Print.
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